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B2 • 20mTarget: 150–200 words

Renewable Electricity Share by Country (2022)

Share of Electricity from Renewables (2022)

Unit: %
022.645.267.890.4113NorwayGermanyUnited KingdomJapanAustralia9846402232CountryPercentage (%)
Renewable Share

Task Prompt

The bar chart compares the percentage of electricity generated from renewable sources across five countries in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Target Expressions0/3 used
account forRequired

make up or form a specific proportion

e.g. “Clean energy accounted for nearly half of Germany's electricity mix.”

stark disparityRequired

a clear and noticeable difference or inequality

e.g. “There is a stark disparity between leading nations and lagging economies.”

by a wide marginRequired

by a large difference or amount

e.g. “Norway outstripped all other nations by a wide margin.”

Scoring Criteria Focus
  • •Static comparison without dynamic trend words
  • •Accurate ranking and proportion descriptions
  • •Clear overview highlighting Norway's dominance and Japan's low share
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Words Written
Target: 150–200
0 paragraph(s) • 0 sentence(s)
Instant Structural Diagnostics (L1 Rules)
Word countfail

0 words: 150 below the 150-word minimum.

Paragraph structurefail

0 paragraph(s); recommended 4. Separate paragraphs with a blank line.

Overview paragraphfail

No overview found. Add a paragraph starting with "Overall," that summarises the 2 key trends.

Target expressionsfail

0/3 target expressions used.

Linking wordsfail

No linking words detected. Use contrast / addition / result connectors.

Lexical varietyinfo

Write at least 40 words to measure vocabulary variety.

Sentence varietyinfo

Write at least 3 sentences to measure sentence variety.